What do you guys think of this page from a book I am writing?

I like it. But, do you mean 100 pages? Or actually 1000 pages? I don't know if you could make it 1000 pages because I think it will be drawn out if you do that, and people would just want the story to end. But, then again, Gone with the Wind is 1000 pages, so, you could do a great job.